Paper revision.

Hi,

I attached the paper with the prof,’s comments. Please read it yourself, because it was first draft and I got bad grade and comments. this would be the final paper and I really need an A. You wrote excellent papers for me but this one was not. please avoid using therefore and excessive use of transition words.

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